Today I presented the Tanka poem to the class and I thought it went pretty well. I think I explained everything clearly and I think everyone understood. Below you will see my Tanka and those of other students who were inspired by my teaching.
From Corinne:
A shattered window
To send shivers down my spine
Through a creaky door
Is.there any more to come?
These questions I dare to ask.
From Tessa:
Darkness up above
Bright moon with surrounding stars
Bats screeching in trees
Possums running round all night,
Sunrise, possums and bats hide.
Katherine:
The sun shines right down
with rays of heat and sunshine
Rain soon comes around
Wind twirls and whirls through the trees
Weather unpredictable
Wow Grade 5/6 you have done an amazing job. Your poetry is very thoughtful and interesting.
ReplyDeleteMy Grade 1/2's have been learning about poetry. We have a poetry blog if you would like to have a look http://12poetry.global2.vic.edu.au/
Maybe your class could teach my class about the poetry you have learnt?
From Miss Gale
Hi Miss Gale,
ReplyDeleteThis morning some of our students have tried out a Dylan Thomas Portrait. They have used your students to teach and inspire them.Thank you grade 1/2 for being our teachers today!
Tessa http://12poetry.global2.vic.edu.au/
Chloe http://chloemch.global2.vic.edu.au/
Jamie http://jamiemch.global2.vic.edu.au/
Rosie http://rosiessl.global2.vic.edu.au/2014/05/23/dylan-thomas-portrait/
Steph http://stephanietsl.global2.vic.edu.au/2014/05/23/dylan-thomas-portrait/
Cooper http://cooperm.global2.vic.edu.au/
http://tessam.global2.vic.edu.au/ oops wrong link for Tess in the previous post!
ReplyDeleteWow! You guys have very well-written poetry! I think our class should do projects on poetry like you.
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